Thursday, 1 September 2016

The lost boy

              Narrative writing

Harry Nelson the boy that everybody didn’t like. Harry Nelson tried to tell his friends he saw a Gray ghost but nobody believed him. Harry saw the ghost every night and was starting to get goosebumps just watching it. The ghost didn't harm harry at all but frightened him. Harry used a big fat old school camera to take a photo of the ghost but every photo he took it just took a photo of a background. Harry attempted everything to prove that the ghost was real but nothing worked. Harry had no playful friends by the time he was year 6 nobody wanted to play with Harry.

Harry had got smelly rubbish thrown at him every morning he arrived at school and Harry cried. Blue tears dripped down from his white cheeks every time he thought why he told them about the ghost. Harry always tried to hang out with his teachers because they were the only people to talk to. The teachers always helped Harry and tried make him some friends but it didn't work. Everyday school was bad and Harry didn’t go to school most of the time.

Harry was red angry and started to throw furniture at the ghost but made the ghost angry back. The ghost screamed at Harry and was not happy the ghost made Harry run around the house. After he lost the ghost he jumped into bed and had hid under the big green blanket and went to sleep. When harry got home he wanted to sleep with his parents but they wouldn’t let him sleep with them. Harry didn’t want to sleep in his bedroom but he had to and every day on the Gray scared Harry.

A really frecky man came to Harry's house and knocked on the door and said “ is Harry here.” Harry came to the door and asked what the man’s name was and the man said “Mark.” Mark said. “ "I heard that your have seen a ghost before” and Harry replied “yes that's right.” The man said he can help him stop seeing the ghost that frightens him every night. The man said he would teach him not to look or bother with the ghost and just sleep. Harry practise every night and started to get the hang of it. It had been 2 months and Harry had never seen the ghost again and slept peacefully. The End

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