I learnt that the Titanic sunk because it hit the iceberg and turned and hit the side and damaged it. They were going from England to New York and there were a little bit of life boats for some people. When the Titanic was going to sink the woman and kids went on the life boats first but the men went last and there was only room for some men. Next time I want to work on adding punctuation so that my message is clearer.
You have the best titanic drawing so far and the way you made the titanic fulled up was cool too.
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I learnt that the Titanic sunk because it hit the iceberg and turned and hit the side and damaged it. They were going from England to New York and there were a little bit of life boats for some people. When the Titanic was going to sink the woman and kids went on the life boats first but the men went last and there was only room for some men. Next time I want to work on adding punctuation so that my message is clearer.
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