Friday, 26 February 2016
Re-crafting
This week I have been learning to deconstruct and re-craft in my writing and
have been doing it on this presentation. I have been deconstruct the word I have
been given. After that I re-craft the word but make it more better and juicer so
my reader can get to deconstruct and then re-craft. Please leave a comment.
Wednesday, 17 February 2016
The Diving Competition
This is my reading presentation that I have worked on this week and have
answered all the question from reading the book. You can get the link on the 2nd
slide and read it to your self. The book is about diving and getting seafood under
water.
2nd Narrative
Jeff Happy is a Tanager that goes to St Willys college and he's been working on a project for the last 4 mouth on the project. He was making a acid poison to test on animals and was going to use a healing potion to make it a healing acid stead like poison. He was working in the basement under the house and was a had made a lab for him to work in. His Dad was a scientist and had built a lab using all his equipment and had studied on a cure to save the people who had cancer.
Jeff is a scientist like his dad because he wanted to follow his Dad's steps. Jeff wanted to help his Dad finished the cure so people would be safe. Jeff is 19 and working on a healing potion and is a trustworthy guy and would never lie`. Jeff was a smart guy and always got a A or A+ in his test’s and got a scholarship.
Tuesday, 16 February 2016
Diving
You can use diving equipment only when you're looking for seafood or finding things under water in the deep. Diving under water can be dangerous because there can be a lot of creature under water that can kill people like sharks for a example. Kaimoana stands for seafood and kaimoana is like muscle's, fish and crab there are a lot of seafood underwater. You can dive on platform and the waft and at the pools .
Thursday, 11 February 2016
Death Forest
There was a dark forest that had tall tree’s and not that many green leaves and no colour but green, black and white. The only thing you could see was dark and little bit of light at the end. There were rock’s on the road which made the road bumpy. The forest was a scary place to be at and nobody has driven down by the forest . And was named scar forest after the death that happened 2 years ago. And that person’s name was Charlie Little and he died from a car crash he tried to take a short cut to the party he was going to. Charlie little was one of the popular people in the town of San Diego. He was always invited to party because he made the party's even better when he was over. Charlie was rich and had everything to himself but lived alone for his life and didn't have any friends. And that was the story of Charlie little's DEATH!!!
Wednesday, 10 February 2016
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