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Tuesday, 16 June 2015

Maths Problem Solving

This is my Maths Problem Solving I have solved 2 problems that my teacher has give me to do. If you push the button on the right on my presentation it will take you to my problems and my ways that I have solved the problems. I have done my problems and come up with a answer when I have solved it out how to get the answer.

Tuesday, 9 June 2015

Whakapapa


This is my whakapapa that I have made with my family photo's from home and
put them on a presentation. I have made this because we had to show our side
and our parents to show what culture.

Maths Problem Solving

This is my Maths Problem Solving I have solved 2 problems that my teacher has give me to do. If you push the button on the right on my presentation it will take you to my problems and my ways that I have solved the problems. I have done my problems and come up with a answer when I have solved it out how to get the answer.

Comparing Auckland to Christchurch


WALT: finding comparisons and differences between items and provide proof.

What I have learnt is comparing Auckland to Christchurch and finding what they have and don't have in Auckland and Christchurch. I have been working with my ground pavlovas and looking at the differences and similarities. Next time I want to work on my juicy words and make them clearer for my readers to read it.

Monday, 8 June 2015

Writing Introduction





This is my writing from my writing introduction about a person jumping into ice cold water. Went had to writing about what the man was going to do next in the photo and have detail in the writing. I hope you like my writing and please comment on my blog to have feed back.

Tuesday, 2 June 2015

Maths Problem Solving


This is my Maths Problem Solving I have solved 2 problems that my teacher has give me to do. If you push the button on the right on my presentation it will take you to my problems and my ways that I have solved the problems. I have done my problems and come up with a answer when I have solved it out how to get the answer.

ANZAC Writing and Reflection


 
On Friday the 25th of April we had a very special Assembly for ANZAC. Mr Burt took us out to show us our special Remembrance field to remember the soldiers who fought for our freedom. They sacrificed their lives to keep peace in this world from all the bad things that happened in world war 1. When all of the kids got to the Remembrance field we had to have a moment of silence to show respect and honour those who fought for us in the war. Then people started praying for all the luck that they have been given to us in this world. And then the trumpet started playing for a moment to finish the end of the assembly.


Did you know that in World War 1 they did not only have soldiers in the army but they had different types of animals to help with things like carry ammunition, pull guns and carry wagons. Dogs were used also to help send messages, to help search for wounded soldiers and carry medicine. Dogs were a better choice to use because they were faster and more quicker than a soldier, so they would have more of a chance to survive if they had to run across the battlefield to send a message to the others. If someone got caught they would let them go because people didn't want to kill others. They would just surrender and send them back to have peace.

At our Special Assembly we had some of our students and teachers wearing poppies to show the remembrance of those who had served for us. Poppies were the first flowers that blossomed in the spring during 1915 on the battlefields when the war had ended. Poppies are worn as a symbol in memory of those who had fought and died for us during the world war 1. It was the inspiration and dedication of two women who promoted this same “Memorial Flower” funds were raised to help support those in need, especially servicemen and civilians suffering from physical and mental hardship as a result of war.

What I have learnt about ANZAC is that in New Zealand ANZAC is marked as a national public holiday, which everybody has a day off to remember those who fought for us in World War 1 . And dogs in world war one they can very help because they help the people that

were wounded in World war 1 and carry things.


I am very proud that I have improved my sentence beginnings in my writing. The first thing I did well was my vocabulary and content because I added lots of Juicy words. I like my paragraph rubric because all my marks are very high. I am happy that I had a good mark.
I have realised that I should have worked on my Planning. My planning has only got 1 or 2 things on my plan and I think I need to do more. I need to work on my Planning and my words very well so I can get a high test mark for my report.

My goal for my next piece of writing is to use a variety of sentences because I want to have more Juicy words. I want to have juicy words so I can keep my audience hooked in.  So next time I will work on writing clearly for my readers.